Seriously, the sound was horrible.
Awesome on so many levels
The art was just beautiful, the sound was great, but the two things that REALLY stuck out was the concepts themselves and the music (which fit the animation oh so very well). You have to have great creativity to create something as unique as this. I cant wait for the next one!
To the person under me
Did you live under a rock? Seriously...
Either way though, even if you weren't familiar with the man's movies, this is still a silly flash.
Pretty good, but still has a lot of problems
I've seen all of your flashes and I still think the plot is confusing. Not to mention that the dialog you used to reveal more information about it always raises more questions while sounding cheesy at the same time. Also, for this one in particular, the audio was really, really bad. The lack of sound effects kind of cripples the flash too. If characters are outside, then it should sound like they were outside, not like they were sealed off in a sound proofed room. Your art though, seems to be improving. There are some quirks in it that still happen, but for the most part, it's pretty good. One thing that isn't your strong suit however, is consistency, your characters have a certain style to them, but when you draw something other than human, that art style falls out the window. (Like that monster they were fighting for example, or the alien that looked like Pac-man's cousin.) Also, you don't go from 2-D to 3-D... ever... seriously, you don't even know how remarkably lame that looked.
Mmkay, well I'll definately consider those tips next time around.
Not the best, as certain parts weren't funny really. Though, My advice to you is that random goes best with irony. I did enjoy reading your author comment though.
That was... rather different from "Pick Up: Act 1" and what probably threw a lot of people off was the sudden change in scenery (and the significant time gap between the two episodes didn't really help either). Other than that, anyone whom has seen the original one could of picked up where you left off. There was a little bit of a problem with the voices fading in and out, making some of the dialog very hard to hear. I liked the constant comedy that was going on-- even during the fight, it's become like a trademark of your writing. Anyways, nice job on it, I really think it blows away the original.
P.S. Why is that most of the fights you make always end up with the protagonist without her shirt? Just wondering...
pretty funny :)
It really deserves a better score.
That was some really good animating! While a little too short, it did make me laugh.
I always find that particular song kind of depressing, but I can't put my finger on why. I was honestly thinking about animating this one, but couldn't figure out how to go at it, and gave up before I even started. I like your taste in music.
The artwork in this one was a little... off. Especially Kandi, her width almost beats out her hight. You've done little to nothing to improve since the last one, and there seems to be a lot less animation in this one, it's kind of weird that they lock up like statues when not in the process of talking. Also, I found it kind of creepy when she imploded while turning to look at Ian.
It seems like you didn't take your time on this one.
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